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All of these golden dreams
Crash and break inside of me

What happened to the person I used to be?
Was that all a fantasy?

From smart and playful and full of hope
To broken and dark, life without scope

Inside of me my soul screams
Wishing for a master that was still free

Dragging down whatever I encounter
Beware my friendship lest I bring you down here

So many things try to drive me to madness
Can I ever dispell this sadness?

Maybe someday we will meet
So you understand my defeat
:icondominaeexitium:
Where have all my dreams gone? Why can I not remember them?
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:iconromeokapulet:
I love the rhyme and style and message for that matter. A lot of people can relate to this piece I'm sure...including myself. Keep on writing :D
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:icondominaeexitium:
Thank you very much :thanks: I will!
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:iconmrsnomnom:
!MrsNomNom Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know this feeling.
Adorable poem. ♥
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:icondominaeexitium:
Thank you :thanks: I'm glad I could express what I was feeling!
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:iconsilencedbook9:
~Silencedbook9 Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
Need a hug?
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:icondominaeexitium:
A hug would be nice yes :thanks:
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~Silencedbook9 Jan 20, 2013  Student Writer
*hugs you*
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