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In the park beneath the trees
Couples chatting playfully

I see them in the distance
As I sit upon this park bench

I came here to sit in peace
To read a book and seek release

Their happiness is a torment
A reminder of what is absent

I get up and walk away
I'll return again another day
I don't begrudge people their happiness. I just wish I could share it.
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:iconjustcrazy96:
Nice one. :D I like how you slowly make your way up to the rhyme.
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:icondominaeexitium:
Thank you very much :thanks:
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PoeticEnd Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can empathize on some level. I don't like being around people who do that, not out of hate or jealousy, just because it feels vaguely distasteful to me...
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Charlieswebsies Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a very neat look at a bittersweet little truth. Very nice. :)
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Charlieswebsies Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem. :)
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